I walked into a dream
or so maybe I thought it was.
Giraffes were floating in mid-air,
dancing amongst dying sunflower petals.
The ceiling jumped to the walls,
the floor hopped towards the ocean sky.
Extraordinary too were the ants,
breaking lines in candied smiles.
Swimming in straight circles,
zebras painted the clouds with shades of red.
Stumbling into a meadow,
pink elephants held my hands.
Ladybugs combed my bottled hair,
undoing the knots and cracks.
Galloping under the crescent night sun,
light beamed down, filled the crevices in my skin.
I died. I woke.

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  • very beautiful imaginations!
    well done!

  • beautifully written, a joy to read 🙂

  • a lovely imagination 🙂 the last line, ” I Died I Woke”, was the exclamation point..!

    My Rally Week 29 Post

    • Thank you for dropping by! It’s been a while since the last time I posted a poem, I appreciate your comment 🙂

  • Anyone that professes their love of caffeine in the title of their blog has my admiration. Haha. LOVE my coffee..;)

    Your poem is whimsy, imaginative, light. Great entry!

    • Yay for coffee lovers! 🙂

  • http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html

    Hello, friend:

    Our Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
    Thanks in advance.
    Hope to see you soon…


  • Nicely done … Love the name of your blog … 🙂

    I’m here from Poets’ Rally (Jingle) … and look for your Rallt poem … Welcome! Hope you enjoyed your first run with it …

  • Hey Hanna,

    A beautiful one- very interestingly penned- very well done.. Loved reading your words

    Here’s mine:

    All the Best

  • http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-natures-elements-air.html

    Greetings, friend!!
    It is Monday, I sincerely invite you to join us for a Monday Poetry Potluck party, bring in 1 to 3 poem treats to share, and have fun tasting other poets treats.
    You will have 60 hours enjoying the fun.
    Hurry up, the more you share, the happier we are.
    Hope to see you in our party, hurry up, the earlier you are in, the more traffic you get…
    to link in, click on the link via this comment, then look at the blue link button at the end of the post, click on the button, have your poem link copy and pasted in the first box, then enter your name, at last your email address…let us know if you need help by leaving a comment under the same post…